Overpopulation of urban area has lead to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that the governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
For the
last
few decades
it is indeed true that more Add a comma
,decades
people
are interested in living cities
rather than rural Change preposition
in cities
areas
. This
scenario can be attributed to urbanisation.Thus
it is obvious that most of
Change preposition
apply
the
urban Correct article usage
apply
areas
are densely populated in
nowadays. It can certainly cause detrimental effects on Change preposition
apply
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
Therefore
it must be addressed immediately.
Rapid
surge in the population in developed Add an article
The rapid
A rapid
areas
can create Correct your spelling
numerous
neumerous
issues. Correct your spelling
numerous
Firstly
,lack
of sufficient job opportunities Correct article usage
the lack
are
a serious issue caused by Change the verb form
is
the
overpopulation. Correct article usage
apply
As a
result
most Add a comma
,result
of
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apply
the
skilled and unskilled labours do not get a job based on their qualifications. Correct article usage
apply
Hence
, their quality of life and family life has become devastated. Secondly
, because of the
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apply
urbanisation
most Add a comma
,urbanisation
cities
have been facing another problem is
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apply
the
pollution. When compared to rural Correct article usage
apply
areas
most of the cities
air,water and soil are highly contaminated recently. Excessive vehicles and poor waste disposal Change noun form
city's
cities'
makes
Change the verb form
make
earth
more and more polluted every day.
Add an article
the earth
On the other hand
, however
it can certainly be reduced by necessary steps. There Add a comma
,however
are
plenty of Change the verb form
is
way
in which Change to a plural noun
ways
this
problem can be solved. Government can implement several solutions to solve the issue. First
, authorities should embark new
job facilities in developing Change preposition
on new
areas
hence
people
in the Correct your spelling
countryside
country side
can stay Correct your spelling
countryside
their
hometown. Change preposition
in their
Second
,increase more
public transport Correct quantifier usage
apply
instead
of private vehicles to reduce the
air pollution and enhance public awareness and encourage Correct article usage
apply
people
to promote recycling procedures can decline air and water contamination.
To conclude, overpopulation in cities
can cause dramatic
impact on Add an article
a dramatic
earth
and Add an article
the earth
people
it is indeed an alarming situation and it must be addressed as soon as possible.Submitted by nairrohith719 on
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