Overpopulation of urban area has lead to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that the governments and individuals can tackle these problems.
For the
last
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decades
it is indeed true that more Add a comma
,decades
people
are interested in living Use synonyms
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cities
rather than rural Change preposition
in cities
areas
. Use synonyms
This
scenario can be attributed to urbanisation.Linking Words
Thus
it is obvious that most Linking Words
of
Change preposition
apply
the
urban Correct article usage
apply
areas
are densely populated Use synonyms
in
nowadays. It can certainly cause detrimental effects on Change preposition
apply
the
society. Correct article usage
apply
Therefore
it must be addressed immediately.
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Rapid
surge in the population in developed Add an article
The rapid
A rapid
areas
can create Use synonyms
Correct your spelling
numerous
neumerous
issues. Correct your spelling
numerous
Firstly
,Linking Words
lack
of sufficient job opportunities Correct article usage
the lack
are
a serious issue caused by Change the verb form
is
the
overpopulation. Correct article usage
apply
As a
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result
most Add a comma
,result
of
Change preposition
apply
the
skilled and unskilled labours do not get a job based on their qualifications. Correct article usage
apply
Hence
, their quality of life and family life has become devastated. Linking Words
Secondly
, because of Linking Words
the
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apply
urbanisation
most Add a comma
,urbanisation
cities
have been facing another problem Use synonyms
is
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apply
the
pollution. When compared to rural Correct article usage
apply
areas
most of the Use synonyms
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cities
air,water and soil are highly contaminated recently. Excessive vehicles and poor waste disposal Change noun form
city's
cities'
makes
Change the verb form
make
earth
more and more polluted every day.
Add an article
the earth
On the other hand
, Linking Words
Linking Words
however
it can certainly be reduced by necessary steps. There Add a comma
,however
are
plenty of Change the verb form
is
way
in which Change to a plural noun
ways
this
problem can be solved. Government can implement several solutions to solve the issue. Linking Words
First
, authorities should embark Linking Words
new
job facilities in developing Change preposition
on new
areas
Use synonyms
hence
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people
in the Use synonyms
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countryside
country side
can stay Correct your spelling
countryside
their
hometown. Change preposition
in their
Second
,increase Linking Words
more
public transport Correct quantifier usage
apply
instead
of private vehicles to reduce Linking Words
the
air pollution and enhance public awareness and encourage Correct article usage
apply
people
to promote recycling procedures can decline air and water contamination.
To conclude, overpopulation in Use synonyms
cities
can cause Use synonyms
dramatic
impact on Add an article
a dramatic
earth
and Add an article
the earth
people
it is indeed an alarming situation and it must be addressed as soon as possible.Use synonyms
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