Overpopulation of urban area has lead to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that the governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

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last
few
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it is indeed true that more
people
are interested in living
cities
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rather than rural
areas
.
This
scenario can be attributed to urbanisation.
Thus
it is obvious that most
of
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the
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urban
areas
are densely populated
in
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nowadays. It can certainly cause detrimental effects on
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society.
Therefore
it must be addressed immediately.
Rapid
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surge in the population in developed
areas
can create
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numerous
neumerous
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numerous
issues.
Firstly
,
lack
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the lack
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of sufficient job opportunities
are
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a serious issue caused by
the
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overpopulation.
As a
result
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most
of
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the
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skilled and unskilled labours do not get a job based on their qualifications.
Hence
, their quality of life and family life has become devastated.
Secondly
, because of
the
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urbanisation
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most
cities
have been facing another problem
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the
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pollution. When compared to rural
areas
most of the
cities
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city's
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air,water and soil are highly contaminated recently. Excessive vehicles and poor waste disposal
makes
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earth
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more and more polluted every day.
On the other hand
,
however
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it can certainly be reduced by necessary steps. There
are
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plenty of
way
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ways
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in which
this
problem can be solved. Government can implement several solutions to solve the issue.
First
, authorities should embark
new
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on new
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job facilities in developing
areas
hence
people
in the
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countryside
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country side
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countryside
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can stay
their
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in their
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hometown.
Second
,increase
more
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public transport
instead
of private vehicles to reduce
the
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air pollution and enhance public awareness and encourage
people
to promote recycling procedures can decline air and water contamination. To conclude, overpopulation in
cities
can cause
dramatic
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impact on
earth
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the earth
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and
people
it is indeed an alarming situation and it must be addressed as soon as possible.
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