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You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently, a new neighbor moved in who has loud parties several times a week. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: • Explain the situation • Describe why it bothers you • Suggest a solution Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Mr. Ronch

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Dear Mr. Ronch, I hope
this
 message finds you well. I am writing to bring to your attention an issue I have been experiencing since a new neighbour moved into the building. Over the past few weeks, they have been hosting loud parties several times a week that significantly disrupt the peace in our apartment. The noise from these gatherings often continues late into the night, making it difficult for me to relax or get a good night's sleep.
This
 constant disturbance has affected my daily routine and
overall
 well-being, as I struggle to focus on my work and maintain a healthy lifestyle. To address
this
 situation, I kindly suggest that you remind all tenants of the noise policies outlined in our lease agreements. Perhaps you could
also
 consider implementing quiet hours in the building to ensure everyone can enjoy their living space without frequent disturbances. Thank you for your attention to
this
 matter. I appreciate your support and look forward to a resolution. Sincerely, Trang Dao
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Include specific examples or details about the disruptive noise to strengthen your argument, such as mentioning the days or times when the noise is particularly problematic.
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Try to reinforce your suggestions with potential benefits or reasons, for example, how quiet hours could improve the overall living conditions for all tenants.
coherence cohesion
The letter is well-structured with a clear explanation of the issue and potential solution.
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The tone of the letter is polite, formal, and appropriate for communication with a landlord.
coherence cohesion
Effective use of greeting and closing, providing a courteous and respectful tone throughout.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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