Some people think that government should invest in saving local languages while others think its a waste of money. Discuss both views and your opinion.

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part in everyone's life because as offspring we have learned our own

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for upcoming generations to know their roots which they born from. To exemplar, individuals are migrating to different countries to settle if they themselves would not

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aware of the importance of their

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how could they teach their

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roots.

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like parents can communicate with children in their own

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the welfare of the citizens.

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for deprived people of the society.

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but not the least, That cash would be used in the

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of the nation. To explain, Government should maintain the books and hire

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guides to publicize the importance of the

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life which should be protected to keep the

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but that money could be used in other beneficial ways like free schools and healthcare. In my opinion, It should be wisely spent on

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of the public.So that they live to teach

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

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Some people think that government should invest in saving local languages while others think its a waste of money. Discuss both views and your opinion.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Many parents choose to teach their children at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the benefits of homeschooling outweigh its drawbacks?

Nowadays, many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problem can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep.

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Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Each government and authority gave funding to art society; however, some people including me are strongly of the opinion that this is a type of wasting money and it is not profitable action that all social class can use it.