Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is said that
people
of different ages and from different cultures can be gathered well by the music
. I agree with that to some extent, since in my opinion, while it is true that the
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music
is a way to bring people
together, it will not always gather people
happily, sometimes badly.
To begin
with, it seems to me that there are three main reasons that music
can bring people
together. Firstly
, the
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music
is one of the ways which can be used for soul conversation. Secondly
, in most cases
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people
will feel happy when they hear music
,
so that they become willing to talk with others or near someone in spirit. Remove the comma
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For example
, it was in the vivid music
that I and my girlfriend fell in love with each other. Finally
, the
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music
is a kind of art, so people
always want to discuss it with others when appreciating it.
However
, the
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music
will not always produce a positive influence, sometimes will lead to terrible things. The music
will inspire the fighting eagerness of someone. For instance
, soldiers will become extremely brave when hearing the battle cry. But from the point of contrary view
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this
may also
make people
commit crimes. That is
why those bars or nights club are the area in which fighting incidents are most likely to take place. We all know that alcohol is blamed for it, but according to my knowledge
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music
is another important factor.
In conclusion, I insist that music
can produce both positive and negative effects in different situations during the exchange of people
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