Some people think studying on campus is the most effective way to learn while others believe that studying online is more effective, Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

During the pandemic, studying online has become spread among the students and lectures.
On the other hand
, some people believe that studying on campus is the most effective way to learn rather than studying online. In
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the studying system.
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,
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Covid-19
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all of the students and teachers not to go to school.
Moreover
, they must stay at home if they haven't
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a vaccine. Surprisingly,
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technology helps us to
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this
problem which children still can study
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meeting online. The
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author
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gives the same curriculum with
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duration of
study
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,
additionaly
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additionally
, they give the homework too.
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, my brother who continued his study
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college
last
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,
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still can have a good score even though he studying online.
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, there are
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of
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online
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meeting
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.
Firstly
, it's not effective due to the differences
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the atmosphere and pressure from the lectures.
Although
the pupils can have the same result in
score
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, the
procces
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process
to get that score seems so different.
Furthermore
, the lectures reduce their standard of scores
such
as practices and group presentations.
In addition
,
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we can find the tools to do the practice,
on the other hand
, we can't find
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in
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our home.
Although
the scores are the same, the quality of the college students will be different.
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is the place to have a new
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habits
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,
such
as communication
skills
and working
skills
which it can't find while studying online. In conclusion,
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studying online has become the solution
as a result
of
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the pandemic
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. In spite of the children
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a good scores
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a good score
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,
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of
skills
such
as communications
skills
and
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skills
will impact the student's future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • online education
  • flexibility
  • accessibility
  • enhancing learning experiences
  • online platforms
  • self-discipline
  • motivation
  • structured environments
  • democratize education
  • broader audience
  • social interaction
  • internet connectivity
  • screen fatigue
  • on-campus experiences
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