In many countries traditional foods are replaced by fast food. This has a negative impact on families, individuals and society. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, it is common that
people
Use synonyms
prefer
fast Fix the infinitive
to prefer
foods
rather than traditional meals. From my perspective, Use synonyms
this
trend Linking Words
cases
a range of negative impacts on individuals, families and societies.
Correct your spelling
causes
First
of all, as we all know, fast Linking Words
foods
are made of ingredients, which Use synonyms
includes
Correct subject-verb agreement
include
a great deal of
salts, sugar, as well as fat. Change the quantifier
a lot of
many
plenty of
People
, who are used to eating these desirable but unhealthy Use synonyms
foods
, are prone to getting Use synonyms
healthy
problems, Replace the word
health
such
as obesity, high blood pressure and heart diseases. When the unhealthy proportion of Linking Words
population
Correct article usage
the population
increase
, Fix the agreement mistake
increases
as a result
, it can cause a great burden on medical expenses on the whole society scale.
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Secondly
, Linking Words
this
development Linking Words
also
can pose a threat to local traditional culture. Take China Linking Words
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for
example, Chinese traditional Add the comma(s)
,for
foods
are Use synonyms
significant
sign of our culture, many Add an article
a significant
people
consider them as a Use synonyms
culture
identity of China. Replace the word
cultural
However
, more and more Linking Words
people
, particularly Use synonyms
young
generation, are losing Correct article usage
the young
the
interest Correct article usage
apply
of
cooking Change preposition
in
tradition
Replace the word
traditional
meal
at home, because it takes more time on preparing and cooking and Fix the agreement mistake
meals
need
years to get proficient. Change the verb form
needs
Consequently
, Linking Words
this
trend can hinder the continuity of traditional Linking Words
custom
.
Fix the agreement mistake
customs
Lastly
, eating fast food case a negative influence on Linking Words
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the relationship
a relationship
relationship
in families, because, family members have less time to get together. Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
For instance
, in China, preparing and eating dinners is an important opportunity for Linking Words
people
to stay together and share their experiences after a hard-working day. As Chinese Use synonyms
people
eat more fast food, we are losing Use synonyms
this
habit in families.
In conclusion, Linking Words
although
fast Linking Words
foods
are convenient and popular, they obviously Use synonyms
case
many Correct your spelling
cause
seriously
negative impacts on individuals and societies.Replace the word
serious
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