Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

In

this

new era, many working-class people immerse themselves so much into

work

, that they are left with almost no

time

for any recreational or personal activity. In my opinion,

this

lifestyle brings them

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of

problems

like poor mental

health

, relationship issues, inefficient

work

performance, and various

health

problems

. In

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essay, I will briefly explain all of these disadvantages.

Firstly

, when we devote all of our

time

to

work

, we devoid ourselves

from

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any

time

to rejuvenate our

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.

Furthermore

, if keep on repeating

this

daily pattern, we start to suffer from mental illnesses like anger, stress, and other psychological disorders.

For example

, when I started my career in 2012, I begin to

work

around the clock, giving myself no

time

for recreational activities, and

as a result

, I suffered from Insomnia.

In addition

to

this

, as our minds are not in their optimum

health

because of overworking, it

also

results in poor performance at

work

.

Therefore

, all in all, it results even negatively for the purpose for which we were sacrificing all of our

time

for

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. To explain

this

, many companies are now forcing their employees to finish their

work

and leave their offices on

time

; and they are seeing tremendous advantages of

this

.

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working for extended hours leaves one with no

time

to spend with family;

hence

, creates relationship

problems

.

For example

, these days, divorce rates are skyrocketing, and

this

is observed mainly in those couples, who are giving very little

time

to each other, mainly due to giving their whole

time

to

work

.

Lastly

, as

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modern people are giving very little

time

to any physical activities due to overworking,

health

issues like obesity,

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diseases are on the rise. Personally, many of my family members, even in their middle age, have suffered heart attacks, as they have no

time

for exercise. In conclusion, the internal drive to career growth is so strong in most of today's working class,

they

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neglect the long-term harmful effects like hampered

work

performance, family issues, poor

health

, and mental

health

problems

. To sum it up, people should devote only the required amount of

time

to

work

, so that they have plenty of

time

to give to their families, recreation, physical exercises, and mental rejuvenation.