Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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some individuals try to judge an individual's background like their traditions, values, and other aspects of their life by the way they dress; I do not agree with
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way of knowing
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essay, I will discuss why these conclusions cannot be drawn at
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time of age.
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a few years ago, many valued their cultural and national dresses a lot, it is becoming a thing of the past these days. Presently, as the world is becoming a global village,
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are adopting the same dress worldwide.
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, a
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wearing a western dress can be seen anywhere whether it be in any part of the world.
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results in hiding their cultural background, lifestyle, and their traditions.
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, it will be a vague idea to judge
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based on their attire.
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, I strongly believe that a
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's attire reveals more about his condition rather than his past.
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, if a
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is wearing torn-up apparel, maybe he or she is struggling financially.
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, if the
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is dressed up in the latest and trendy clothes, it speaks that his or her wealth status is of the rich class.
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, in both conditions, it will be difficult to have any idea about where they come from or even about their religion.
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, it is better to get to know other
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instead
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of labelling them by their choice of clothes. In conclusion,
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a
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can give ideas about their wealth status and status quo, it gives no information about their culture and upbringing as the world has now adopted similar dressing styles.
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, it is not wise to judge others by their clothes nowadays.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attire
  • fashion trends
  • individuality
  • first impressions
  • designer labels
  • social status
  • cultural appropriation
  • dress codes
  • traditional garments
  • sartorial choices
  • symbolism in clothing
  • cultural identity
  • expression of self
  • global fashion industry
  • cultural integration
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