You are going to spend your vacation in Rome, Italy. Your friend's grandfather lives there and has offered to let you stay in his apartment. Write a letter to your friend's grandfather. In your letter: Thank him for the offer but politely decline infrom him of when you will be in Rome and your travel plans invite him for an outing.

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Dear Sam, I hope you and your family are in good spirits. Ravi, your grand-son, asked me to convey his greetings. I received your letter the other day and I am thrilled that you have invited me to stay over at your residence while I am on holiday in Italy. To tell you the truth, I will be visiting Italy for a day and, while I am there, I am going to explore a handful of historic and heritage monuments as recommended by a friend of mine, Mr Ricki. What's more, I have to travel to France by catching a ferry that day, departing at 9:00 Pm.

Therefore

, I will not be able to stay with you,

however

, I thank you for the courtesy extended. That being said, I would like to invite you

instead

to join my wife, Susan, and me for a lovely brunch at the Big Chill Cafe in Rome if you are free.

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, suggest

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some places that I may explore during my visit to Rome. Warm regards, Utsav

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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174 words

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