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Although there is a lot of software available today that can translate from one language to another, it is still necessary for people to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Learning a foreign language in my opinion is very necessary nowadays.It is a part of the knowledge and culture of everyone.Both of them are good ways to understand people but for ,myself I would choose better learn a foreign terminology than using translating transmit software.I feel
this
 way for two reasons which I will explain in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
,by learning a foreign vocabulary you will have more confidence in yourself when you speak with
other
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 that are from the same nation and don'
t
 know your native vocabulary.
For example
,
last
 summer I had a tour of Paris.My desire was to visit all the historical places because I am in passion about history but I don'
t
 understand well what they explained and I became too much angry with myself.After I back home I started a course about French words.
On the other hand
,of ,course if you are too busy with other things you don'
t
 have free time to learn every language for each place you visit.One time when I went Japony to hold a conference on the construction of buildings I don'
t
 know their speech but I used google translate from Japan to Albanian and in
this
 way, I haven'
t
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difficulty with understanding.It was a good experience in my profession that took the best solution thanks to using the software. In conclusion,I strongly believed that learning a foreign vocabulary is better for all of us because you will become more confident in yourself and others.
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