Some people believe that children should not be given homework every day, while others believe that they must get homework every day in order to be successful at school. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Few individuals prefer that assignments should not be given to
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every day.
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,some believe that they must get
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regularly in order to achieve at school.
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essay will discuss both views as far as I am concerned I will be in favour of not giving
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repeatedly to the learners.
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of all, giving
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to the
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feel them burdened and they get exhausted very quickly.They are not able to do extracurricular
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that one should enjoy in
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early childhood.In other ,words they are not able to concentrate on their extra skills as well as interpersonal skill. For ,instance it is proven by the study
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oxford that individuals that focus on
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extra curricular
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activities
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rather than academics are found to perform better throughout
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life.
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homework
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should not be provided
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to the student as it creates a shortage for other
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.
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few human
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agree that regular
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to the
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should be given to perform exceptionally well in school.
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with , Regular revision of a subject helps to retain the knowledge about the subject. It gives a direction to the student to
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and compete with other fellow mates .To demonstrate, regular
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strenthens
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strengthens
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the academic profile of the student which in
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acess
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access
them to secure excellent grades.
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,
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who
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the
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on time are
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of teachers and usually are class monitors.
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, it can be said that children are able to
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achieve
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achieve
in
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class if they do
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work
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on time. According to me , children must not be forced to do
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regularly rather ,
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should
be balance
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in giving
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homework
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.
Furthermore
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, all other
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like playing, dancing etc should be added to
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lifestyle.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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