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Band 7.5

Write a letter to your friend who you recently travelled with to a foreign country. Include • Why you enjoyed the trip • What you are doing now • An invitation to visit you now

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Dear Emma, I hope you're doing well! I’ve been thinking a lot about our recent trip to Italy, and I just had to write to tell you how much I enjoyed it. Exploring the ancient streets of Rome and getting lost in the charm of Venice with you was simply unforgettable. The food, the culture, and the laughter we shared made it one of the best holidays I've ever had. I'm especially grateful for your sense of adventure — who else would convince me to try squid ink pasta? Since returning home, life has picked up pace again. I’ve gone back to work, and things have been quite busy with new projects starting. Outside of work, I’ve been taking Italian language classes — inspired, of course, by our trip! It's been challenging but fun, and I already know how to order a cappuccino properly now. I’d absolutely love for you to visit me sometime soon. Spring is just around the corner here, and it’s the perfect time to explore the countryside nearby. We could even plan a weekend getaway like we talked about. Let me know what dates might work for you — I’d be thrilled to host you. Looking forward to hearing from you! Warm wishes, Sophia

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coherence and cohesion
The letter is well-structured and logically organized. Each paragraph addresses a specific aspect of your experience, which enhances clarity.
task achievement
Consider adding a little more detail about specific experiences in Italy to enhance your response. This will further engage your friend and provide a more vivid picture of your trip.
positive
The friendly and conversational tone is very engaging, making the letter enjoyable to read.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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