Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other times in history would be interesting to live in?

Becoming successful at a sport needs a lot of effort.
Although
some think natural abilities itself enough to be a successful sportsman, others think their commitment level is far too important.
This
essay will discuss the importance of natural abilities and commitment levels.
In addition
, why it is important for a player to work harder to reach their goals. It is true that recent years are more convenient for a variety of reasons.
Firstly
, with the advances in technologies, people could have better standards of living.
For example
, developments in communications lead to a reduction in distance and individuals can easily access each other around the globe.
Furthermore
, with high speed and comfort transport systems compare to the past, people can be moved easily in search of decent jobs.
Secondly
, we have still enough natural resources to use and the quality of air, soil and water
are
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acceptable and it is not at a critical level.
Consequently
, the governments could prevent more pollution with effective measures.
Finally
, with developments in agriculture methods, there are plenty of food products which eliminate starvation these days. New methods
such
as genetically modified result in various kinds of fruits which readily accessible in hypermarkets.
Therefore
, living in
this
century has a number of benefits for human beings.
On the other hand
, it will be more attractive if we could live in the
next
century.
Although
, physiologically we cannot live longer, in my opinion, several decades later the Earth will be a more interesting place to live with highly advanced technologies. In spite of the fact that environmental problems may threaten human lives, with advances in science humans can experience the highest level of comfort.
For instance
, with ultra-speed flying cars people can go wherever they want and
also
with virtual reality technology the world’s nations could live in parallel worlds. In conclusion, in my opinion, we are living in the best period of history for various reasons. While there are some environmental issues that must be tackled, life in the future will be a most interesting experience
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