Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays,
although
obesity has been converted into one of the most important illnesses in the World, there are people that guess that Linking Words
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situation is a result of bad decisions from parents in feeding infants, but others like me think that it is a consequence of the government absence who have not included Linking Words
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topic into its priorities.
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of all, as leaders of any country governments have shown deficiency implemented feeding plans in the school, even if parents take control over the food that children consume, they will find a wide offer of high sugar foods in school. Linking Words
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, recent research has found that the majority of the food that we can find in any restaurant has high levels of sugar or saturated fats. That´s why it is important to avoid the sale of Linking Words
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kind of product in schools.
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of regulation absence relate to health prevention plans from the government increase the fatness in children currently the politics are directed in supply medicaments in cases of its presence Linking Words
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of attacking the causes. Linking Words
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, each year the health forecast in Colombia increased for illnesses related to being overweight. Actually, the number of children accessing obesity surgery has increased in the Linking Words
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few years. Definitely, Linking Words
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treatment by the government does not attack the original problem.
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illness is necessary a change of mind from the authorities, it should take the main role in the solutions including more taxes on beverages rich in sugar or promoting change in the lifestyle of youths to reduce obesity ratios.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...