Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain: - Why you are writing to them - why you think the insurance shold not be increased - What you want them to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to the recent price hike for my vehicle
insurance
policy issued by your company.
My name is Jerry, and I have been your loyal Correct your spelling
customer
customers
cuatomer
Correct your spelling
customer
since
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for
last
8 years when I Correct article usage
the last
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purchased
puchased
my Honda Sedan. Correct your spelling
purchased
This
goes without saying that insurance
industry is Correct article usage
the insurance
highly
competitive industry and staying with Add an article
a highly
single
insurer for so long would Add an article
a single
means
a lot for your organisation. On Wrong verb form
mean
this
occasion, however
, your organisation has disappointed me by increasing the the
monthly premium amount for the 2nd time in Remove the redundancy
apply
last
3 months.
Since I have become your Correct article usage
the last
policy holder
, I have never filed an Correct your spelling
policyholder
insurance
claim which is a
proof of the Correct article usage
apply
the
level of Remove the redundancy
apply
efforts
I have put to maintain the vehicle. Fix the agreement mistake
effort
In addition
to this
, recently, I have also
bundled up my home insurance
along with vehicle insurance
. Hence
, I feel that the increase in the insurance
premium is not appropriate.
A copy of my insurance
policy is enclosed with this
letter for your reference, and I would like to request you to reconsider my particular case and reaccess my profile based on the facts mentioned above. As a result
of which, I expect you to not increase my insurance
premium.
I hope you will pay heed to my concerns and consider my case favourably.
Yours faithfully,
Jerry MalikSubmitted by amanmalik640 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite