Essay topics: In many countries, children are getting fatter and less fit day by day. Why is it so and suggest solutions.

In

this

contemporary era , technology affects all the

group

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groups

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of people

such

as

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holders

olders

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older

, teenagers and morely

children

.

In

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a result,

children

face many

problem

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problems

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such

as obesity , eyes

problem

and mental stress, etc. In

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essay, I would

like

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tolike

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explain what are the main reasons behind

this

problem

, and

i

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will suggest

the

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solutions

of

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to

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this

matter.

Intially

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Initially

, many pupils played many

outdoors

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outdoor

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games

,

such

as cricket , football and

hocky

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hockey

.

However

, since mobile phones

arrives

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many

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children

children's

childrens

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children

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forgot

this

type of outdoor

games

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game

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because they like to play mobile

games

and video

games

so

that

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they have many

problem

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problems

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in

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at

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such

small age .

For instance

, my neighbour's son has been playing a lot of

games

in

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on

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mobile so

in

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as

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a result they become fatter.

Moreover

, many

children

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do

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fo

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do

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not

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does not

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prefer home

food

and

hygenic

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hygienic

food

so

that

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they

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often

oftenly

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often

go outside for lunch , dinner so all

this

street

food

consume

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consumes

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more fat oil and kids

easily

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are easily

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affect

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affected

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by their taste and oil .

In addition

, every

problem

has a

sollution

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solution

aslo

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also

in

this

case , there are several

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solutions

sollution

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solutions

for

children

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children's

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obesity

regarding

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apply

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.

Firstly

, parents should encourage their

child

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children

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to play more outside

games

and should not provide them

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with smart

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smart phones

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smartphones

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,

many

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or many

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other

devises

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devices

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also

.

Furthermore

, many

children

not

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do not

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like

home made

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homemade

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food

so parents should make some

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delicious

delicius

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delicious

food

in

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at

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home

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the home

a home

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but without many

ingridiants

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ingredients

so they easily

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overcome

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over come

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overcome

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to

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apply

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this

problem

. In conclusion , surve

of

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to

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WHO , in many

country's

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countries

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pupils suffered from obesity and many other problems

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because

becuase

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because

of

usage

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the usage

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of mobiles and

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outside

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out side

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outside

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food

so

this

is

global

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a global

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problem

so

also

school and colleges encourage some

children

to start some new

seminar

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seminars

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and

competion

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competition

as well .