Some people think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In my country, the aesthetic of

people

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changing. Taiwan has a lot of old

buildings

, and some

people

felt that should be knocked down

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because

was

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not good at looking. In my way, I hope the old building can keep it well

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because the building

all

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about

our

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history of our country. In the paragraphs below, I will tell the reasons why I do not agree with the case.

Firstly

, I think the old fashion

buildings

are

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represent

for

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the history of

people

who lived in the

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pass

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;

in addition

, the building

also

can bring

the

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memories to think about the happy time of our childhood.

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, my mother is a nostalgic person,

moreover

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she always told me she want to buy an old house

as

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the house she

was

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lived

.

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Secondly

, the

buildings

also

can

fascinated

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the foreign

people

who were

traveling

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here, because the style is totally different

with

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their

buildings

.

Beside

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, the modern one

is looks

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more

fashion

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than

old

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one, but if we knocked down the old

buildings

to make modern

buildings

, that would be not special to me.

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, if you got a present

everyday

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and nothing

change

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,

then

you would

be feel

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really uninterested after

few

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days.

In the

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sum up, personally, I like to stay in really traditional

buildings

, because that can make me feel myself living

in

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the

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history live. As I mentioned earlier, I like the feeling the old

buildings

bring to me, so I disagree with knocked down and

give

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way to modern

buildings

.