Some people think that the only way to judge someone’s success in business is by the amount of money they make. Is this a true indicator of the success of a business and in what other ways could success in a business be measured?

Paying university fees is becoming a huge challenge for most students.

Therefore

, most students do different types of part-time jobs to cover most of their expenses.

This

essay will discuss why it is a smart move to take a job to cover up your cost while studying

although

, you have a limited time to study for your exams. On the one hand, there are myriad reasons to claim

the

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money as a deciding factor for success in a

business man's

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businessman's

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life.

First

and foremost, money has the highest visibility, while it is directly connected with the status of a person, whereas it shows via the lifestyle of an individual. A businessman,

for instance

, who possesses a huge revenue would definitely upgrade his living style like

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a house, an expensive car, and other

real-estate

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real estate

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properties and so on.

Consequently

, people could find that the

business

person made the biggest turnover in his firms through

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visibility.

On the contrary

, while it is true that the profit gained through the

business

could depict a man's victory,

this

could not be considered

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the exact symbol of achievement.

Firstly

, a good conglomerate could be recognised by the reputation it earns through the proper

administrations

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administration

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like, providing a regular salary to

staffs

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staff

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, maintaining high-end infrastructure, tie-up with overseas traders, and

finally

the revenue it generates. Since, all these aspects are interlinked with one another,

if

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failing to satisfy one condition could end up in a massive pitfall for

this

private firm,

hence

,

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reliability is paramount. In conclusion, the quantum of money earned by a person in his

business

might depict his supremacy, but still, there are other factors like standards and honour

would

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be a relevant

factor

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factors

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to ascertain an individual victory.