More people put their personal information online (address, telephone number,…) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

These days, technology has been developing, so people have access to a range of things online, but it is important that they put their personal

information

on the apps and websites for doing their regular work. In my opinion, it is a negative development owing to the fact that governments know about our position

also

, some people can still your identity to commit

crimes

. On the one hand, if you fill out the websites blank correctly, managers of these things sell our

information

to authorities, so they can follow us and find your habits and favourites;

as a result

, you do not have private lifestyles

due to

the fact that international governments have

this

information

.

For example

, the population in one country

that is

not native;

moreover

, they buy their things on the Internet;

thereafter

, they can see their original government and know about their home address, phones, and so on.

On the other hand

, when the websites that know our

information

are hacked by communities who do offences;

then

they can use our identity to commit

crimes

after many times we can see we are in prison for massive

crimes

while

we are ordinary citizens and work for a company;

furthermore

, when the

crimes

were done in other regions we were at work or sleeping;

hence

, it is important that our families and lawyer spend a lot of time on the fact that we are not convicts.

To sum up

, technology helps us to have perfect lives;

nevertheless

, the evidence that our

information

can be shared or other people are able to use them are not professional

happens

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