Because of improved technologies in communication and transport, people in some countries can now choose to live and work anywhere they want. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years due to
covid-19
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there was a major lockdown almost everywhere on the globe.
Offices
were working fully online &
employees
were working from
home
. In my
opinion
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the advantages are much more than the
disadvantages
. It depends on the individual perspective. There are many advantages to
this
situation
as I feel a person can do
work
in his comfort zone rather than going to the office and working. It increases flexibility in
job
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. There are Thousand of multi-million dollar
companies
which don't have
offices
their
employees
are working from
home
their meetings are done online mainly on an app called "zoom", though they don't have a proper working space still they are performing well and making huge profits & turnovers. Due to the hit of
Covid-19
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almost all of the
companies
had started their
work
online. But ,
eventually
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most of them got back to their traditional
work
style while there are a lot of businesses &
companies
who have packed up their
offices
and are encouraging their
employees
to
work
online. As it saves up huge amounts of office expenses &
offices
rent eventually employes
also
are happy as they save up a lot on travelling & they can
work
in their comfort zone, their travelling time saves up & it drastically helps in less traffic congestion in the city. An individual can live in a different part of the planet and can
work
in a different part of the earth as many
companies
have adopted
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the online working environment. The company named "Meta" is the perfect example of
this
situation
. Owned by Mark Zuckerberg
this
company has already adapted
this
working environment themself. As far as we are concerned about the
disadvantages
to
this
situation
I feel there are not many of the
disadvantages
as the earth are making progress & a lot is changing on our planet. Working style was outdated & the change is a must I feel, it's needed.  ,
Still
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some major
disadvantages
are very less socialization
between
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employees
. sometimes physical presence is important in some workplaces as everyone will be working from
home
it will be impossible to build a good relationship with
employees
. Some studies say people working from different parts of the world usually job from their
home
's & in their comfort ,zone their performance efficiency declines gradually. As we summarize
this
essay it shows that the advantages of working from any part o the globe outweigh the
disadvantages
of
this
situation
.
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