Should humans adapt to technology or should technology be adapted to us? Is technology making us intellectually weaker or more intelligent? Discuss both views and give your point of view?

Advancement with
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to human beings but same time others
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contradicts
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. Adaptation to
technology
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our intelligence or making it weaker is something both views will be discussed in
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technology
, it has revolved our generation into a more fascinating century , before now mobile phones
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constructed with pressing keyboard but now
a lots
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of new
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envoke ,
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mobile phones
then
do not have accessibility to internet it's
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usage
was limited on just calling and answering.
Although
it enhanced communication between one another.
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technology
adaptation has
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the knowledge into different horizons,
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use of modern
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integral
facilitate their workload and
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meeting up with the criteria required.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Complement
  • Enablement
  • Dependency
  • Erosion
  • Amplification
  • Over-reliance
  • Adaptive technology
  • Inclusive design
  • Digital divide
  • Intellectual development
  • Personalized learning
  • Distraction
  • Artificial intelligence (AI)
  • Automation
  • Human adaptability
  • Plasticity
  • Creative thinking
  • Critical thinking
  • Innovation
  • Problem-solving
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