International travelling is becoming cheaper and more countries are opening doors to increase the number of tourist. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this

In

this

cutting edge era,

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individuals can

travel

to any part of the globe easily as more

countries

are now welcoming the global citizens to visit their cities either for a vocation or for business trips and it is

also

due to the reasonable price that cost for a trip.

However

, there are both benefits and drawbacks while travelling internationally and I shall discuss them in depth.

Firstly

, there are ample advantages for a country where there are

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number of tourists increasing every year, especially, after the effect of COVID-19 and a large

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of folks got vaccination people

start

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to

travel

for both recreation and business. To add to it, while there are visitors from

a foreign

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foreign countries

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countries

to a city of another country, tourism industry and other related sectors are becoming stronger and stabler since

this

create

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a number of jobs for people who are jobless in the past two years. The hotels and dining rooms are getting more lively because of those international travellers and so do the transportation system are activated again.

Moreover

,

this

also

helps to recover the business of one country as the investors can

travel

to invest more in other

countries

that

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lead to the development of

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economics

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.

In contrast

, because

those

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international visitors, there are

also

a number of negative effects after their visit. To exemplify, a historical site of Myanmar, Bagan

are

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now

cover

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with a lot of waste and the local people have to deal with the air pollution issue as the responsible bodies cannot manage well the waste system and

also

the

visiter

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visitor

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litter either intentionally or

unintentially

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unintentionally

.

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has

also

led to

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damage

of

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environment

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the environment

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due to the

oversumption

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overconsumption

presumption

and burning the fossil fuel

as a result

of transportation. To sum up, it is true that

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transportation and accommodation becomes cheaper and more accessible for international visitors to

travel

to

another

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another country

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countries

.

Thus

,

this

has brought not only positive but

also

negative impacts

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a

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society.

However

, I believe that we can still promote

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tourism where the individual bodies

also

set up effective policies that can prevent the disadvantages

that

is

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happening.