last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents say what you would like them to do about this problem You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you with
a regards
to a Correct the article-noun agreement
regard
bag
I forgot on the plane last
week, on Flight R223 which went to London from Belgium on the 2nd of January.
Let me explain my situation, I was seated on F21, a window seat. When the plane landed, I tried to get to the clearance area as soon as possible because I had a late appointment I needed to meet up on. When I had come
back to my Hotel I realised I did not have my Wrong verb form
came
bag
.
The bag
is blue, with a black strap and a silver inscription of my initial JJ on its top left corner. Included in the bag
is a picture book, a bunch of keys, and a digital camera, leica
to be precise, it Change the capitalization
Leica
also
has two memory card disks.
I would like for you to confirm if the bag
was discovered in
the airline, Change preposition
by
furthermore
can I get Add a comma
furthermore,
a detailed information
on how to claim a lost item from your airlineRemove the article
detailed information
a piece of detailed information
.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Change the punctuation
?
Your
Faithfully
James Jones.Correct the word
Yours
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the letter has a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. The logical structure is good, but make sure each paragraph contains one main idea.
task achievement
As per the task response, while the candidate addressed all parts of the task, more details could be provided, such as the flight date and seat number in a more detailed context.
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