The student who study from the school to university get benefit less and contribute less too, than those of student who go to travel or job and get skills and experience before going high. Do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary epoch, education has been a major benchmark for folks in attaining
success
in diverse aspects of life
. In view of this
, there is an irrefutable discussion that argues whether students
who travel or get a job before proceeding to tertiary institutions tend to be more successful than undergraduates
who do not. This
essay agrees with the point above and would discuss it in the following paragraphs while I conclude with my opinion.
To begin
with, I agree that students
' exposure to real-life
scenarios is a catalyst to success
before proceeding to a tertiary institution. Many undergraduates
who are privileged to either travel or work for a certain period of time before getting admission into the university
always understand their aim and objective which makes them focused on their goals in life
. For instance
, my cousin started working in Mc Donalds when he finished high school for two years till he attained a managerial post because of his level of understanding of life
objectives. Going forward, he got into the University
of Texas and happens to own a small gadget business since his first
year which is very successful to date. Invariably, students
getting exposed to real life
or travelling gives them a background knowledge of life
before university
days.
On the other hand
, having hands-on experience
is a major benefit for growing undergraduates
. This
is a major aid to students
who are about to start their university
life
because it will give them a better understanding of their lectures and practical class as they have attained experience
before time. For instance
, In 2009, Wole Soyinka, a lecturer and political activist at the University
of Ibadan, Nigeria conducted research on the effect of students
having hands-on experience
before kick-starting their university
life
which stated undergraduates
are more productive with hands-on experience
. Undoubtedly, hands-on experience
is an attribute of a student's success
.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that students
are mandated to travel or work for a short period of time because it would help re-orientate their mindset towards attaining success
in every sector of life
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
