Some people believe that in the future, environmental problems will mean that we are unable to live on this planet. In order to survive, the human species will need to find another planet that can support life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In the 21st century, the environmental pollution is ever-increasing. Some people hold the view that

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experts need to find some other planets that can support life for humans predicting challenges to live

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the Earth in future

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argument.

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exploring new planets will be costly.

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environment means we have to sacrifice all our money for that but we do not know the amount exactly because space exploration is an unpredictable work.

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, countries will

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treasures and individuals will have to face

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severe consequences

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as poverty.

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shows that it is not an easy goal to move people into another space. Other than that, the required

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unknown

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. It is possible that

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planets,

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may become to an

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extinction

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wild life

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should be there to maintain our lives. Finding

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a major problem. Considering these factors, it can be noted that discovering alternative worlds is only a

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task. In conclusion, it has to be agreed that locating other spaces means not only a waste of money but

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explorations.

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impacts that we are currently facing.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

environmental degradation
sustainable development
renewable energy
carbon footprint
biodiversity loss
climate change
greenhouse gases
deforestation
pollution
habitable planets
space colonization
terraforming
ethical dilemmas
resource allocation
technological advancements

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Some people believe that in the future, environmental problems will mean that we are unable to live on this planet. In order to survive, the human species will need to find another planet that can support life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much. Do you agree or disagree? What other types of job should be highly paid?

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Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The advantages brought by the spread of English as a “global language” will outweigh disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

In many countries women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring. To what extent do you agree or disagree?