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Competitiveness is a positive quality for people to have among most societies. How does competitiveness affect individuals? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

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 nature of competing with others is considered to be a special trait which brings positive effects to our communities. In
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 I will focus on the mechanism of
competitiveness
influence
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 people and bring out my perspective
toward
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this
 development.
To begin
 with, the fruit of competing provides
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an individual
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individual
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individuals
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a
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strong feeling of dominance and more motivation to improve. It is scientifically proved that moderate competitive
behavior
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behaviour
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 within a
group
 can eventually lead to overall success. The different backgrounds allow members to make
comparison
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comparisons
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whether
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about whether
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 their comments or
behaviors
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 are well enough to lead to their team's profits.
Furthermore
, the spirit of comparison keeps on influencing the whole
group
 and slowly sinking to every aspect of it, which
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 to a beneficial feedback circulation. Through these competitions, our community can eventually evaluate to a new unprecedented level. In my opinion,
competitiveness
 definitely brings
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merits to society.
However
, the negative effects
also
 should not be overlooked. Take some political parties
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 example, they tend to compete for their personal interests and sacrifice the benefits of
whole
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group
.
Such
 processes are inevitable;
however
, the best way to avoid these negative effects in order to keep the wellness of our competitive nature is that stay humble and accept every structural
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 within the
group
. In the long run, as we focus on staying good
competitiveness
 in our
group
 it can have absolutely merits over demerits. To sum up,
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competitiveness
 is our human nature
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 and absolutely brings
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tremendous value to our society. In my opinion, we should cherish
this
 comparison process and take advantage of the results to elevate ourselves.
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