You recently saw an advertisement about a business conference that can be helpful for your work. Write a letter to your manager asking permission to attend the conference.

Dear Mr Jones, I am writing to inform
about
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a
business
meeting on new
business
enhancement in March by TATA Company. The conference will give more information on technology which enable our
business
to the
next
level. It is scheduled by the major
business
development organization from Chennai.
Last
week, I was surfing the internet to gain knowledge on
a
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demand generation. Surprisingly, I noticed about
this
summit on the social media page, and I registered as an attendee on behalf of our company. It is very essential for me to participate in
such
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an event
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event
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as a
business
leader. It will give new contact for our
business
and help others to know about our organization. I would be grateful if you allow me for attending
this
meeting and I would appreciate it
,
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If you could let me know the status by end of
this
week to make
an
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arrangements. Yours Sincerely, Arun
kumar
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