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Hi Arun, I hope you are doing well during

this

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pandemic situation. I am writing to remind you about our holiday

trip

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to Dubai but there is an unavoidable activity scheduled for me by the manager. As you know, I am associated with my present organization for more than 5 years. We booked a

trip

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to Dubai because of its popularity in tourism as well as many adventurous activities which will help us to overcome our work pressure and give us peace of mind. Surprisingly, I received an email from my manager about the activity planned at the client's place by

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week Since it is critical work, he asked me to be at the client's place without fail. My team members are well aware of the client environment but not much as

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. Because of

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, we will reschedule our holiday

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for a

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-to-

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week. I have already initiated an email conversation with the travel agent, and I looped you in that email. I know it is a bit frustrating for you but it is a request from my manager as well as my promotion approval on his table. Eagerly looking forward to joining you on our holiday

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. Warm Regards, Ashok

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

205 words

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There is a public event coming up in your town. You think your friend would be interested to take part in it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter describe the event explain why you think he/she would be interested in it suggest an arrangement to meet there with him/her

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Write a complaint letter to the owner of a TV channel, to complain about the steady decline in the quality of their TV programmes over the last decades.

some people say that what individuals do to protect cannot make difference, others say that individuals can protect environment. discuss both views and give your own opinion

Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

Some people think that government should invest in wildlife projects and protect them. Other people think it is better if government invests money in other projects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?