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In some cultures, the parents arrange marriages for their children but in others, children choose their marriage partner. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each system?

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Marriage is the most jubilant event in many societies ,particularly among youth .Some families would prefer persons must choose their own partners ,while, others opine
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 responsibility is on the shoulders of the elders that they to do the selecting a spouse,so , I am going to discuss both systems to clarify
pros
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 and cons.
First
 of all, the most
advantages
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 that youngers have authority to do choosing their own partners
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 learning each decision has
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consequenses
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consequences
 and
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strenght
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strength
 is the fundamental part of maturity ,
furthermore
,
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know
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 ownself and the basic part of wellness in
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marriage
mrriage
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marriage
 is having
appropriate
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 understanding of each other ,
moreover
 ,since, young people must spend their times to know about how can
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 make the right decision because the lack of
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 knowledge may be distracted their own life in upcoming problems .
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, it is inevitable elders have more experience to knowing others
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 as in marital matters ,
in addition
 ,parents are well known their own children,so , many communities allow the parents choose coupe for sons and daughters ,
as a result
 of
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 , freshers would be used from fathers and mothers to conducting their lives ,so, they will not take the maturity on their life ,anyway, arranging marriage by parents has many damages on the personality of each person . To summarize , each person must pick the responsibility to manage their life and using
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 experience of elders that they will make a better decision .
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