Nowadays, more people are spending less time at home. Why do you think this happens? What effect does this have on individuals and society?

It is true that individuals becoming more workaholics and spend most of their time in the workplace.

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it is happening due to numerous reasons and has affected folks in various ways , I would elaborate in upcoming paragraphs and state my opinion about it.

First

of all, people have responsibilities for their families and offspring which make them

work

hard all day long for their future.

Secondly

, Societies are becoming more materialistic, citizens run behind their desires.

For example

, buy big houses and expensive cars which are unaffordable for them to give the instalments they are left with no choice but to

work

long hours.

Lastly

, Prices are unsurmountable due to inflation,and workers with basic wages are been affected. Exemplar, employees with low salaries have to

work

overtime to pay for their basic needs like health and groceries.

Although

,

This

trend has several consequences on humankind

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as poor health. To illustrate, Folks got less time to cook foods and eat properly which end up with diseases

such

as PCOS in women, stress etc.

Furthermore

, broken relationships as peops spent more away from their loved

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results in poor communication and a lack of understanding.

In addition

to it, people

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around the clock on effort more than anything else

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to problems like depression, loneliness and frustration. As a way of conclusion, I would say people should have proper balance in their tasks and quality time which will lead to happiness and healthy living.