Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road saftey. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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roadsafety
. Some argue, that strict punishment for driving offences is the key to it, others believe it would be more effective to set other measures.
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, it’s clear that a strict punishment for driving offences is absolutely necessary. It is important to understand, that the street-system
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could other measures, just as new regulations, help as well. In my Add a comma
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, a mix of both would be the best.Fix capitalization
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