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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

#plastic #bags #bottles #environment #damage #governments #individuals
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 is the major problem which
affect
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an
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environment
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 bags,
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 packaging are
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plastic
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 which cannot
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 and it
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to
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nature in long term. It can affect the natural sea and forest. There are
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plausible reasons
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 damaging the
environment
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 and positive solutions in the following paragraph.
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 of
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are
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 very harmful
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nature and
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affect
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human in
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 term era. The single
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 of
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 in packaging, water bottle, bags etc are not able to recycle and cannot
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 again. Through
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plastic
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 not only nature get affected but
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affected
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 is
very
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 poisonous material which can harm individuals and they can get diseases and
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major problems can
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.
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, in Italy the major work was based on
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use
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 of
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 they threw it on the garbage truck and in the river after collecting the
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 threw truck they decided to destroy the
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 with fire. Due to
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 of
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 poisonous gas
appear
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 and it mixed in
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environment
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an environment
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 many people in Italy get affected with
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 gas many individuals die
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.
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, individuals and authorities must have to take action against
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use
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 of
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. To solve
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 problem there is one solution which is
ban
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a ban
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on
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single-use
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single
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single-use
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use
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plastic
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. Authority must have to approve 50-micron
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 thickness because above 50-micron
plastic
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 can recycle and can
use
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 again and again. Some part can be done by folk by just producing the
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 which can recycle. To cite an example, in India recently the government has pass the rule against
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single
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use
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 which was
overnight
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 decision but it is
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effective
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affective
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also
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. Some pupils dislike
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the decision because they were getting income on that product. But is in
mass
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 effective decision and help the people
also
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. To conclude, in
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 contemporary era,
the
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plastic
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 is very bad for the
environment
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 and
health
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the health
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to
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 the public, but
their
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 is a solution
about
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this
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 problem which is to ban single-
use
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plastic
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plastic pollution
  • ecosystems
  • wildlife
  • climate change
  • fossil fuels
  • air pollution
  • strict regulations
  • plastic consumption
  • eco-friendly alternatives
  • sustainable packaging
  • recycling facilities
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