Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

In
this
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plastic
is the major problem which
affect
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to
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an
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environment
.
Plastic
bags,
plastic
bottles, and
plastic
packaging are
single
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use
of
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plastic
which cannot
be recycle
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and it
affect
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to
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nature in long term. It can affect the natural sea and forest. There are
a
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plausible reasons
of
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damaging the
environment
and positive solutions in the following paragraph.
To begin
with, sing
use
of
plastic
are
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very harmful
for
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the
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nature and
it
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affect
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to
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human in
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term era. The single
use
of
plastic
which
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use
in packaging, water bottle, bags etc are not able to recycle and cannot
be
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use
again. Through
the
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plastic
not only nature get affected but
also
human and animal can
also
affected
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.
Plastic
is
very
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poisonous material which can harm individuals and they can get diseases and
the
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major problems can
also
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.
For instance
, in Italy the major work was based on
plastic
industries which
use
in
single
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use
of
plastic
they threw it on the garbage truck and in the river after collecting the
plastic
threw truck they decided to destroy the
plastic
with fire. Due to
fire
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of
plastic
poisonous gas
appear
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and it mixed in
environment
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many people in Italy get affected with
this
gas many individuals die
also
.
However
, individuals and authorities must have to take action against
single
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use
of
plastic
. To solve
this
problem there is one solution which is
ban
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on
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single
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use
plastic
. Authority must have to approve 50-micron
plastic
thickness because above 50-micron
plastic
can recycle and can
use
again and again. Some part can be done by folk by just producing the
plastic
which can recycle. To cite an example, in India recently the government has pass the rule against
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single
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use
plastic
which was
overnight
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decision but it is
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affective
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also
. Some pupils dislike
about
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the decision because they were getting income on that product. But is in
mass
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effective decision and help the people
also
. To conclude, in
this
contemporary era,
the
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plastic
is very bad for the
environment
and
health
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to
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the public, but
their
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is a solution
about
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this
problem which is to ban single-
use
plastic
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • plastic pollution
  • ecosystems
  • wildlife
  • climate change
  • fossil fuels
  • air pollution
  • strict regulations
  • plastic consumption
  • eco-friendly alternatives
  • sustainable packaging
  • recycling facilities
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