You recently broke your leg and your colleagues from work sent you get-well cards and presents. Write a letter to them and: - thank them for supporting you - describe how you spend your time - explain your recovery process

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Dear colleagues, I hope you all are doing good. I'm just writing to thank you guys for your lovely wishes and presents which made my day. When I got up yesterday, I was surprised to see my room full of presents, flowers and get-well cards. For a moment, I forgot all my pain and tried to grab the presents but soon realizing my condition, I asked my brother to show me the cards and the gifts. Frankly speaking, I became emotional after seeing so many wishes for my well-being. These prayers for sure will speed up my recovery process. Without your presents, my routine here is pretty boring, thanks to my fractured leg. But, looking

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the positive side, it has given me time to learn about my interest area which is financial planning. I spend most of my time reading about it. Other than

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for quite some time now. Today morning, the doctor visited for

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check-up and shared that I'll get

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rest before getting back to normal life. But if I take the services of physiotherapy, I will be able to walk in two months. I'm waiting eagerly to get back to normalcy and once again thank you for your gifts and wishes. See you soon ! Regards Aman

Submitted by amanmalik640 on Sat Jul 30 2022

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