Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that government should spend public money on saving these languages, While others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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There has been a controversy about whether endangered

languages

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should be protected by the government. I think it's a waste of money, and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.

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, those

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are extremely difficult and strict. Take Latin as an example. It was the official

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of the Roman empire.

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this

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language

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is considered a dead

language

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and only high-level educational institutions teach it nowadays. The reason is that the grammatical structure of

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language

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was too rigorous and complex that only high educational nobles could master it;

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, it didn't prevail among the general public.

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, due to the extinction of the Roman empire,

this

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language

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was gradually extincted as well. In

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case, it would be an ill-advised decision certainly if the government planned to "resurrect"

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language

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, endangered

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represent outmode. It has been reported that many Chinese dialects are in danger of extinction. I think it is not a bad thing because these dialects derived from poor transportation in ancient China. On account of terrible public transport, most people could only stay in the place where they were born;

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, my forefathers invented a local special

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in order to give the local residents an identity.

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, because of developed transportation, people can go anywhere they want nowadays basically. At

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point, dialects are considered the signs of isolation and under-development.

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languages

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are the witnesses of history; it's our responsibility to preserve our history and it's our duty to prevent them from being extinct. In

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case, were the government to spend money on saving these endangered

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, it would be better. In conclusion, I believe the demerits of spending money on saving endangered

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outstrip their merits.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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