Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that government should spend public money on saving these languages, While others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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There has been a controversy about whether endangered

languages

should be protected by the government. I think it's a waste of money, and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.

First

, those

languages

are extremely difficult and strict. Take Latin as an example. It was the official

language

of the Roman empire.

However

this

language

is considered a dead

language

and only high-level educational institutions teach it nowadays. The reason is that the grammatical structure of

this

language

was too rigorous and complex that only high educational nobles could master it;

therefore

, it didn't prevail among the general public.

As a result

, due to the extinction of the Roman empire,

this

language

was gradually extincted as well. In

this

case, it would be an ill-advised decision certainly if the government planned to "resurrect"

this

language

Second

, endangered

languages

represent outmode. It has been reported that many Chinese dialects are in danger of extinction. I think it is not a bad thing because these dialects derived from poor transportation in ancient China. On account of terrible public transport, most people could only stay in the place where they were born;

hence

, my forefathers invented a local special

language

in order to give the local residents an identity.

Nevertheless

, because of developed transportation, people can go anywhere they want nowadays basically. At

this

point, dialects are considered the signs of isolation and under-development.

On the other hand

languages

are the witnesses of history; it's our responsibility to preserve our history and it's our duty to prevent them from being extinct. In

this

case, were the government to spend money on saving these endangered

languages

, it would be better. In conclusion, I believe the demerits of spending money on saving endangered

languages

outstrip their merits.

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2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Complete response

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