Today more and more tourist are visiting places where condition are difficult such as Sahara or the Antarctic. Discuss advantage and disadvantage for tourist who visit these places.

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There has been a controversy about whether
tourism
is helpful to places where conditions are difficult. I think its demerits outweigh its merits, and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.
First
, it can worsen the local resource shortage. It's expected that in order to develop local
tourism
, accommodation and transportation are of the utmost importance.
Therefore
, many buildings,
such
as hotels and stations, are required to build.
However
, all those functional buildings are pricy and cost numerous resources, like water resources and electronic resources. They can cause or worsen the resource shortage locally, especially in places with difficult conditions, like Sahara.
Second
,
tourism
can destroy the local ecosystem. As mentioned in the
last
paragraph, so as to satisfy tourists' wishes, countless functional buildings are required to build.
Nevertheless
, the land area is limited;
hence
, if more stores are built up;
in other words
, the living space for animals will be deducted. Take the Amazon forest as an example. According to some statistical figures, the Amazon forest decreased by 200,000 square meters from 2003 to 2010. In
this
case, innumerable animals lost their habitats on account of our greed for
tourism
.
On the other hand
,
tourism
has some advantages as well.
For example
,
tourism
can propel local economic development. The money gained from
tourism
can be used to promote local infrastructures,
such
as hospitals and schools.
As a result
, there will be an increase in the local residents' living standards. In conclusion, I believe the disadvantages of developing
tourism
in places with challenging conditions outstrip its advantages.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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