The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide, as poor people become poorer and rich people become richer. What problems could this situations cause? what are the solutions to address those problems?

The problem of
poverty
has become more and more serious, whereas the group of wealthy
people
remains unaffected, which
cause
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the
wealth
gap
widened
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. In
this
essay, the potential problems are stemmed from
this
such
as hate
crime
and classism will be addressed, and suggestions on how to tackle these problems will
also
be delivered. As the friction between the
wealth
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wealthy
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and the poor
people
increased
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, it could cause severe issues
such
as
crime
related to classism, and the injustice caused by the long-term social confrontation. Classism is when
people
categorize and make
judgement
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to
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individuals
of
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society
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by one’s income. The
people
with higher salary seem to overlook those who are struggling in
poverty
, and while in the reversed situation the poor
tends
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to hold hostility attitude toward the rich. So that the hate
crime
could arise.
On the other hand
, it is
also
well-documented that the
people
who are economically weak are vulnerable to
change
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made by public sectors,
such
as the raising tax. As we can see that street
protest
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and
labor
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labour
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strike
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in every country increase these years, causing the malfunctioning of
the
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society
as well as
the
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devastating influence on the economy. The solutions, that should be considered, are aid from the government and charity events held by private organizations.
First
of all, the public sectors always have the most powerful administrative right to correct
such
inequality.
For example
, the calculations of tax
rate
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should put more
emphasize
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on income levels. Families with high annual incomes have more responsibility
to
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tax paying.
Secondly
,
the
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charity events can
also
evoke public awareness
to
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of
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those who are suffered from
poverty
. By making
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a donation
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donation
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donations
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to these
group
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groups
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of
people
, the
poverty
problems and the
society
confrontation will definitely be improved sooner or later. To sum up, it is obvious that the gap between poor and
wealth
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wealthy
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are
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is
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getting larger. Frequent occurrence of hate
crime
and street protest seems to become normal. In order to create a
harmony
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harmonious
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society
and eliminate the gap between poor and
wealth
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wealthy
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, immediate actions should be taken before the situation get worsen.
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