Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ? A person should never make an important decision alone . Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer .
From my everyday experience , and observation I can claim that discussion of an important outcome with other communities brings many benefits . In the following ,paragraphs I will give my reasons to defend
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of all , the different families have different opinions . In order to make the right choice public should discuss every possible settlement and its consequences . Making an important selection alone can bring many negative aspects . Linking Words
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, a person can reveal his selfishness or impatience and the consequences of that verdict can affect many nations in the future . I think that a good and wise finding can be born only in a discussion because the population can share their knowledge and experiences a look at the problem from different sides and aspects .
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of all , I think that making the settlement alone is unacceptable ,especially for a team . Imagine that a chief makes the finding about increasing a production line without discussing it with his employees . In Linking Words
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,case a part of the association's profit will be spent on the extended purchase of raw materials . So , shareholders will be left without dividends . Linking Words
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judgment may lead to getting rid of the team's shares and Linking Words
as a result
a declining value of a club as a whole . To sum up , I think that a person should always consult his relatives or colleagues when making an important opinion to avoid possible mistakes .Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite