Eating too much of sugar is harmful for health. Some people think it is government's responsibility to limit people's sugar consumption while others think it is individual's responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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sugar
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. They believe initiatives should be put into place to encourage the public to opt for healthier, more nutritious and less sugary foods. A result of Use synonyms
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is that individuals will increase the number of healthy foods they consume in exchange for the previously sugary snacks they used to eat. Linking Words
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statement, I feel it would be impossible for the Linking Words
government
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a positive action, has had an underwhelming effect on the reduction in Linking Words
sugar
consumption amongst the public. Use synonyms
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is due to drinking companies only reducing the Linking Words
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Therefore
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is based on the idea of health autonomy. In that everyone makes their own decisions in relation to their health. some will want to eat and buy lots of sugary snacks but Linking Words
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government
, ultimately, it is the choice of each person, what they want to put into their body. Use synonyms
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For example
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this
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government
could encourage healthier eating by promoting healthy eating initiatives. It is, Use synonyms
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, only an individual that can influence how much Linking Words
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