Eating too much of sugar is harmful for health. Some people think it is government's responsibility to limit people's sugar consumption while others think it is individual's responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that
sugar
is harmful to health. The responsibility
, however
, of who is accountable for the negative effects of sugar
, is up for debate. Some believe it is the government
's prerogative to curb people's sugar
consumption, whereas others
argue it is up to each individual to limit the amount of sugar
they eat. This
essay will discuss that, although
the government
could introduce some initiatives, ultimately sugar
intake
is the responsibility
of the individual.
To start, many insist that the responsibility
for sugar
intake
falls upon the government
. They believe initiatives should be put into place to encourage the public to opt for healthier, more nutritious and less sugary foods. A result of this
is that individuals will increase the number of healthy foods they consume in exchange for the previously sugary snacks they used to eat. Although
I agree with the sentiment of this
statement, I feel it would be impossible for the government
to control the decisions an individual makes. For instance
, the introduction of a sugar
tax in busy supermarkets, although
a positive action, has had an underwhelming effect on the reduction in sugar
consumption amongst the public. This
is due to drinking companies only reducing the sugar
level to just below the acceptable mark.Therefore
, it is up to individuals to not choose fizzy drinks but to reach for water instead
.
Secondly
, others
think it is the responsibility
of an individual to limit their sugar
intake
. This
is based on the idea of health autonomy. In that everyone makes their own decisions in relation to their health. some will want to eat and buy lots of sugary snacks but others
will choose not to. I agree that no matter the actions of the government
, ultimately, it is the choice of each person, what they want to put into their body. This
responsibility
shouldn't be passed on to anyone else. Despite the vast number of fast food options available, some will cook at home while others
succumb to the temptation. For example
, there has been a 40% rise in the cases of diabetes according to a study done by the Washington Post in 2021, this
is despite the recent amendments made by the government
to combat an increasing sugar
intake
.
In conclusion, some believe the government
could encourage healthier eating by promoting healthy eating initiatives. It is, however
, only an individual that can influence how much sugar
they eat.Submitted by khadija.i on
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