You are a member of a sports club in an old building. Now, all the members are asked to provide suggestions to the manager of the club about the improvement of the club's facilities. Write a letter to offer some suggestions. In your letter, 1. describe your suggestions for improvement 2. describe what benefits the members can obtain after improvement

Dear Mr Smith, I am writing in response to your letter asking us to give our opinion on the renovation of the building. I have been one of the members
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sports club since two years ago, it is my pleasure to share some ideas about the matter.
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with, the changing room is in urgent demand of improvement. The door locks can not work properly and are so old that they give me a sense of insecurity whenever I use them.
, there are some dark spots around the swimming pool, proper lighting would be the best solution. If these problems could be addressed, I believe that it would become a safer place for all the club members to enjoy doing sports . And, there will be no more risk of slipping on the wet floor at night. Thank you for your effort, and I look forward to the changes in the future. Yours sincerely, Kelly Hsu
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