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It will be better for society and individuals if driverless cars are widely used. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement？

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Someones say that it will be better for society and humans if auto-driver
cars
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 are widely used. In my opinion, I partially agree with the statement because of some pros and cons below.
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, there are two major drawbacks resulting from the increasing use of driverless
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. One major drawback will be that it can lead to an increase in unemployment, especially for taxi drivers. Another drawback will be that driverless
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 can be attacked and controlled by hackers.
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, Many benefits will result from driverless
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. The
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 main benefit will be the growth safety of commuters which now is depended on drivers. The
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 benefit is that people will save a lot of time used to control their car.
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