Some people believe the
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government
should finance
on Change preposition
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social
services
like retirement
pensionFix the agreement mistake
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for adults
instead
of spending its budget on public
services
like agent
needFix the agreement mistake
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while others say
individuallyReplace the word
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should save their
fundFix the agreement mistake
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during their working years.
This
essay will delve
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the upcoming paragraph and
subsequently
will explore perspective in turns.
On the one hand,
Although Correct word choice
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I believe
government
should definitely allocate
largeAdd an article
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part
of
it'sReplace the word
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budget
onChange preposition
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public
services
. The
government
economic sector
determineChange the verb form
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overallAdd an article
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quality of life, ensuring the basic sector
such
as school, hospital and roads are available to all the
citizen
irrespective
theirChange preposition
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income and social
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. The public
services
are needs are primary needs of
the Correct article usage
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society and
thus
needsCorrect subject-verb agreement
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proper funding.
For example
,
absenceCorrect article usage
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of medicine in any country will create significant problems. That's why
governmentAdd an article
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should adequately finance
on Change preposition
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public
services
in
firstAdd an article
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place.
BecomeWrong verb form
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old is normal
thingsFix the agreement mistake
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toChange preposition
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everyone
however
younger
citizen
are participate important role
forChange preposition
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the
countryChange noun form
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economic growth.
On the other hand
, retire
adultFix the agreement mistake
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are
vitalAdd an article
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part
of
the Remove the article
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every family.
WhomCorrect pronoun usage
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encourage their close ones as well as
providingWrong verb form
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their experiences. I think adult must save their funds during their working years.
However
old people
also
are
integrateWrong verb form
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part
of
the Correct article usage
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society. Some ancient could save their money but most
of Change preposition
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oldAdd an article
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citizenFix the agreement mistake
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could not save money because of high expenses. I think
governmentAdd an article
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should provide free medicine and
treatmentsFix the agreement mistake
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ofChange preposition
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low incomeAdd a hyphen
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citizens.
For instance
,
in Change preposition
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Sri Lanka
haveCorrect subject-verb agreement
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been
provide Change the verb form
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free hospital treatments for citizens.
In conclusion, after a thorough analysis of the topic,
Although Correct word choice
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I believe
government
should allocate its budget for argent needs.
However
old
citizenFix the agreement mistake
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alsoAdd a missing verb
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crucialCorrect article usage
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part
of
the Correct article usage
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society. I think
governmentAdd an article
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should implement
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long termAdd a hyphen
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concept for
this
problem
thus
if not it becomes
hugeCorrect article usage
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impact
ofChange preposition
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their life.