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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

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some people have speculated that in near future all the vehicles
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, buses and trucks will be automated with the constant flourishment of technology.
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 it has connected with some demerits as unemployment and technical issues, I tend to agree that
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 would have more benefits and the following paragraphs will describe the reason behind my opinion.
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, seld-driven vehicles will save the time individuals have spent learning and improve their driving skills.
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, the time which people spend just travelling by themselves can convert to do more efficient work
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 as reading a book or preparing for the
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 task of the day
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. These automated
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 are programmed using artificial intelligence.
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, it helps to reduce collisions which can happen due to careless
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 and passengers. For example, Tesla has experimented with their self-driven
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 in Germany for the past few years and it has clearly shown
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 driver-less car reduced road accidents by 30% total in the year.
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, these self-commute
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 can create a huge issue regarding unemployment. Taxi drives, bus and truck
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 will lose their jobs and over time there won't be any job market called
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. Even though it happens, different job opportunities wii born with
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 new trend. To exemplify, bus
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 can have a job as a mechanic or give their contribution to mapping and programming the roads. To conclude, while the aforementioned advantages may have drawbacks connected to employability, there is a reasonable scope to consider
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 fantastic idea; driverless vehicles because of their efficiency and effectiveness.
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