Some people believe that Art gives our lives meaning and purpose. Others believe that it is merely a distraction from real life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the modern ,world there is a polarizing opinion regarding

art

. Some

people

think it has a

lot

of advantages, others suppose it does more harm than good. ,

Further

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both of these points will be reviewed and

also

I will lead with a logical conclusion. Let's start with the

first

point which is about positive things in

art

.

First

, for some it is a main line of

work

, they adore it and cannot just live without it. Their main goal is to create music, draw portraits and do other stuff. We can not deny its

usefulness

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of it.

Second

,

this

line of

work

generates quite good profit. I am talking not only about some wealthy individuals, but

also

a more large group of

people

or even

such

things as a city budget.

For example

, in

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there are a

lot

of music festivals and

art

exhibitions which are only possible with help of

art

and

people

who are busy in

this

sphere.

On the other hand

, there are a

lot

of

people

who think that it is a waste of time to focus on

art

.

Firstly

, they claim that we have to concentrate on more important aspects like global warming or poverty. They assume that we need to spend all of our power and efforts trying to minimize the effect of

such

negative things.

Secondly

, they are sure that by creating some

art

people

are trying to avoid dealing with really glaring problems, probably because they are afraid of it.

For instance

,

instead

of pushing the envelope in the technology area, a community just write poems which

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not help a

lot

in complex situations. In conclusion, I completely disagree with the ones who believe that

art

is switching our focus from real problems to something less relevant. Musicians, artists, and writers are creating a

lot

of materials that motivate others to

work

harder in many different spheres, like physics or politics.

Art

is extremely helpful in desperate times and I am concerned that without it our

work

would be much worse.