Some people believe that Art gives our lives meaning and purpose. Others believe that it is merely a distraction from real life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In the modern ,world there is a polarizing opinion regarding

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. Some

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think it has a

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of advantages, others suppose it does more harm than good. ,

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both of these points will be reviewed and

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point which is about positive things in

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, for some it is a main line of

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, they adore it and cannot just live without it. Their main goal is to create music, draw portraits and do other stuff. We can not deny its

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of it.

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this

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line of

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generates quite good profit. I am talking not only about some wealthy individuals, but

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a more large group of

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or even

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things as a city budget.

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there are a

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of music festivals and

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exhibitions which are only possible with help of

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and

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who are busy in

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sphere.

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, there are a

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people

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who think that it is a waste of time to focus on

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, they claim that we have to concentrate on more important aspects like global warming or poverty. They assume that we need to spend all of our power and efforts trying to minimize the effect of

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negative things.

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, they are sure that by creating some

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people

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are trying to avoid dealing with really glaring problems, probably because they are afraid of it.

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of pushing the envelope in the technology area, a community just write poems which

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not help a

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in complex situations. In conclusion, I completely disagree with the ones who believe that

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is switching our focus from real problems to something less relevant. Musicians, artists, and writers are creating a

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of materials that motivate others to

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harder in many different spheres, like physics or politics.

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is extremely helpful in desperate times and I am concerned that without it our

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would be much worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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342 words

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