You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

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Dear Mrs Rose, Hello, How are you? Nice to meet you, I’m glad you are my neighbour beside my house. When we met

last

time we are moving up the furniture, sorry about that we just talked a little bit. So let me introduce

this

letter. My name is Rachel, come from Chichester, Uk. My family involve me, my husband and my 2 sons. I’m writing

this

letter to you that it is about

week my home will organise a housewarming

party

.My friends here in London wanna have a gathering

party

with me. Because we are a long time no see each other. There will be almost 20 people coming around here. I’m afraid that would be a bit annoying for you, so I anticipate informing you, hope you don’t mind our

party

at all. Mrs Rose,

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would like to invite you to join our housewarming

party

too, we can talk more and know about each other. It is happening on

week Friday, 11/8/2021, at 8,00pm. You can bring your family to come too. I will prepare a lot of delicious food. Thank you again, hope we can see it

week Friday. And here is a bit gift for you and your family,

this

is my handmade bagel,

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think

this

is enough for you and your family. May I get your feedback is it delicious ? Hope to get your response and have a nice day. Thank you!! Best wishes, Rachel

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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1Word repetition
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8 paragraphs

246 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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