You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

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Dear Mrs Rose, Hello, How are you? Nice to meet you, I’m glad you are my neighbour beside my house. When we met

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time we are moving up the furniture, sorry about that we just talked a little bit. So let me introduce

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letter. My name is Rachel, come from Chichester, Uk. My family involve me, my husband and my 2 sons. I’m writing

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letter to you that it is about

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week my home will organise a housewarming

party

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.My friends here in London wanna have a gathering

party

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with me. Because we are a long time no see each other. There will be almost 20 people coming around here. I’m afraid that would be a bit annoying for you, so I anticipate informing you, hope you don’t mind our

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at all. Mrs Rose,

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would like to invite you to join our housewarming

party

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too, we can talk more and know about each other. It is happening on

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week Friday, 11/8/2021, at 8,00pm. You can bring your family to come too. I will prepare a lot of delicious food. Thank you again, hope we can see it

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week Friday. And here is a bit gift for you and your family,

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is my handmade bagel,

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think

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is enough for you and your family. May I get your feedback is it delicious ? Hope to get your response and have a nice day. Thank you!! Best wishes, Rachel

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

246 words

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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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Team/group activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are played alone. To what extent do you agree or disagree？