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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

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Dear Mrs Rose, Hello, How are you? Nice to meet you, I’m glad you are my neighbour beside my house. When we met
last
 time we are moving up the furniture, sorry about that we just talked a little bit. So let me introduce
this
 letter. My name is Rachel, come from Chichester, Uk. My family involve me, my husband and my 2 sons. I’m writing
this
 letter to you that it is about
next
 week my home will organise a housewarming
party
.My friends here in London wanna have a gathering
party
 with me. Because we are a long time no see each other. There will be almost 20 people coming around here. I’m afraid that would be a bit annoying for you, so I anticipate informing you, hope you don’t mind our
party
 at all. Mrs Rose,
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 would like to invite you to join our housewarming
party
 too, we can talk more and know about each other. It is happening on
next
 week Friday, 11/8/2021, at 8,00pm. You can bring your family to come too. I will prepare a lot of delicious food. Thank you again, hope we can see it
next
 week Friday. And here is a bit gift for you and your family,
this
 is my handmade bagel,
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 think
this
 is enough for you and your family. May I get your feedback is it delicious ? Hope to get your response and have a nice day. Thank you!! Best wishes, Rachel
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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