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You are currently running a course and have a part-time job. Your boss suggested that you leave your course and work full time. Write a letter to your boss. in your letter, you should: -tell him/her your decision -explain the reason of your decision.

#course #job #boss #work #time #-tell #decision #-explain #reason
Dear Mr.Altunkum, I am writing to express my decision about a part-time
job
 in Hareket. I believe that your suggestion is better than the current
job
, particularly in salary and
job
 description.
As a result
 of
this
, I want to say that I will quit my part-time
job
 as soon as possible.
On the other hand
, I need an extra two weeks because I do not want to leave the position empty. Because during the part-time period, they really helped me a lot. So it is very important for me to give my experience to another colleague.
Moreover
, the guy who does
this
job
 needs to have some essential skills
such
 as programming and designing.
Additionally
, I think we have to talk about my work hours again because I will have a lot of exams next week.
Consequently
, I need to work hard to pass the exams, so I want you to give me one week off.
Also
, I would be grateful, if you could give me my whole salary for
this
 period. If you have any thoughts, please do not hesitate to call me anytime. Kind regards, Salih Zeki Köni
Submitted by salihzekikoni on

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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea and that the ideas connect logically to each other.
task achievement
In your letter, make sure to directly address the points required by the task: your decision regarding the job situation, and the explanation for that decision.
coherence cohesion
Use a variety of linking words and phrases to connect ideas within and across paragraphs.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and respectful tone throughout the letter. Avoid casual language in a formal setting.
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