Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter, - invite him or her to a public event in your country - describe the public event - explain other plans you have for your friend when he or she visits.
Hey Arslan, it's been a
while
! Hope you're doing good. Just wanted to give you a heads up
that I've got my outfit sorted for Independence Day and I'd love for you to join me in celebrating. On 14 August, Pakistan was born and it's a big deal here. We all get the day off, schools and offices have events, and the kids go all out to show their love for the country. After the celebrations, I'm planning to rent a farmhouse near my hometown with two bedrooms, changing rooms, and a pool in the middle. We'll have a BBQ by the pool too. Let me know if you're coming so I can sort out your stay. Can't wait to catch up!Add a hyphen
heads-up
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task achievement
It would be helpful to provide a bit more detail about the significance of Independence Day celebrations and what specific activities will take place.
coherence cohesion
Consider breaking the content into more distinct paragraphs to improve readability and coherence.
task achievement
The letter has a warm and friendly tone, appropriate for writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
The text is logically structured and covers all required points: invitation, description of the event, and plans for the visit.
coherence cohesion
The closing is well done, leaving a clear call to action for the friend to respond.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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