Some people think that criminal behavior can have genetic reasons while others believe that only circumstances can lead people to crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some say that

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delinquent

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character can be linked genetically , while others will argue that, only certain

situations

can cause some humans to offend.

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essay will argue that,

although

offensive

behaviors

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can be transmitted genetically,

situations

alone can make people

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offend. On the

one

hand, hardship is

one

of the enormous reasons individuals claim

situations

alone can cause humans to be at fault.

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is because, if individuals have all that they desire or want, no

one

will

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go out of their way to take anything that does not belong to them. Admittedly, desiring something dearly will force people to move out and do what is not expected of them.

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, it was reported that the most notorious criminal in Ghana

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stopped stealing after a big supermarket was opened for him.

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has helped those leaving within his

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to have some piece of mind .

On the other hand

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stealing is

one

of the many reasons others believe it is hereditary. A key factor to

this

is that, some people

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never change from their bad habits even when they get all they need. Even though continue stealing can be hereditary,

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not withstanding

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when they are provided with what they desire, they will not offend anyone.

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, after

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of investigations done on the recent robbery, it revealed that

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they were all brothers.

However

, the government has made

provision

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to set up a business for them since they claim both of their parents are no more. In conclusion, after examining the two views, it is seen that

situations

only can make someone a thief. I will

therefore

recommend that the government should provide basic things for the citizens.