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More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve these problems?

#animals #verge #extinction #list
Over the
last
century
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 the world has been in constant development and
governments
 have been taking natural areas to build towns and cities.
As a result
,
this
 era of development is leading to wildlife extinction, which generates enormous consequences
in
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 the natural environment. In
this
essay
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 I will explain why nowadays wild animals are in danger and how
this
 problem can be solved.
Firstly
, modern
governments
 are taking over natural zones and modifying the environment in order to build new cities and
infraestructures
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infrastructures
infrastructure
;
therefore
, ecosystems are being destroyed and some wild animals are on the verge of extinction or on the endangered list. Secondary, crowded and polluted countries are the main cause of global warming, which
also
 affects
wildlife’s
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 ecosystems;
for example
,
a
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recent research showed that the global temperature is 4 degrees higher than in the
last
 500 years, and some species are expected to not survive to it. From my point of view, local
governments
 have to start to enclose natural areas and develop new laws in order to protect wildlife;
furthermore
, they should plan ahead when they need to build
new
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infraestructure
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infrastructure
 to ensure that wild animals do not get affected. In conclusion,
governments
 have the main
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responsibility
responsability
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responsibility
 in avoiding the loss of more species; and
therefore
, in protecting the natural environment and all the ecosystems.
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