Violence on television has a negative impact on children’s behaviour. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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society

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at least one hour a day in front of the television. When it comes to families with young kids, it is important to avoid having them in front of the screen when

violence

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scenes are shown, at that early

age

children can

interpretate

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interpret

violence

as something common in life. On the one hand, modern families use the television as an entertaining method for the young ones, that can keep

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for a couple of hours. Many parents are aware of the new technologies that can block

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scenes and shows or movies for people under a certain

age

,

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is a

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tool when it comes to homes where toddlers are allowed to choose what they want to watch.

On the other hand

, from the

age

of six most kids start to play videogames on the TV, some of the most popular games at that

age

are related to wars and fights,

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makes them

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get submerged in a fantasy world where they need to save their character to keep playing and beating levels. A recent study posted by the University of Buenos Aires showed how young people

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confused between real-life and

screen-life

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after spending more than three hours a day in front of the screen,

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affects their interactions, social life and their emotional intelligence, which leads

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a negative impact on their behaviour. In conclusion, with new

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technologies

techonologies

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technologies

improving every day it is hard to keep children away from the television and

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of screens, but when it comes to

violence

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shows and games it is important to implement a good educational system where they can understand that

violence

is not a way to live or something

thay

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that

they should be using in their life.