Many people are opting for several careers as compared to a single career to earn more money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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life
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a
master
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sportspersons
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the
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their
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. So, Use synonyms
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/her for the whole Correct pronoun usage
him
life
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population
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the population
want
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wants
fields
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field
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live
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lives
life
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as
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to
fullest
by making gross from both Correct article usage
the fullest
options
.
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To conclude
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although
a new fashion is to have many earning Linking Words
options
and degrees continue Use synonyms
along with
an individual in an entire Linking Words
life
, the single Use synonyms
career
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option
cannot be ignored. My opinion is that many Use synonyms
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